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1.On the last weekend I felt very tired, and I couldn't regain my energy. 2.So I slept for almost 2 whole days. 3.I couldn't do what I had to do. 4.I shouldn't have slept for that much time. 5.But I slept for so long yesterday, I feel refreched now. 6.We will encounter the moment of parting. 7.Why do you bully that kid? 8.By the time I got there, they had already eaten all the pizza, because I was too late. 9.By the time we reach there, she will come to meet us. 10.That bread is very delicious and famous.So it is sold out quickly. 11.She has already leave Seoul. 12.Korean is very conservative because Korean has been influenced by the Confucian culture from old times. 13.The story is about that the main character feels doubts a material world of the adult. 14.I became to think about mammonism and our lost purity again. 15.What I am actually saying is that I have a weak body. 16.I have no power to exercise.

Hi Ms. [이름]! Well done on your sentences here! Review my corrections and take note of them. Be careful with the spelling, punctuation and spacing next time okay. ^^ Have a great Monday! Enjoy! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.On the last weekend I felt very tired, and I couldn\'t regain my energy. >> Last weekend I felt exhausted and I couldn\'t regain my energy.2.So I slept for almost 2 whole days. >> CORRECT3.I couldn\'t do what I had to do. >> CORRECT4.I shouldn\'t have slept for that much time. >> I shouldn\'t have slept that long.5.But I slept for so long yesterday, I feel refreched now. >> CORRECT OR >> I feel so refreshed now.6.We will encounter the moment of parting. >> CORRECT OR >> We will encounter the moment of separation.7.Why do you bully that kid? >> CORRECT8.By the time I got there, they had already eaten all the pizza, because I was too late. >> By the time I go there, they had already eaten all the pizza because I was late. - better9.By the time we reach there, she will come to meet us. >> CORRECT10.That bread is very delicious and famous.So it is sold out quickly. >> CORRECT OR >> That is a very delicious and famous bread so it was quickly sold out. - better11.She has already leave Seoul. >> She has already left Seoul.12.Korean is very conservative because Korean has been influenced by the Confucian culture from old times. >> CORRECT OR >> Koreans is very conservative because Korea has been influenced by the Confucian culture from the old times. OR >> Korea is conservative because Koreans were influenced by the Confucian culture from the old times. *Be careful with the words \'Korean\' and \'Korea\'. ^^13.The story is about that the main character feels doubts a material world of the adult. >> The story is about the doubtful feeling of the main character towards the material adult world.14.I became to think about mammonism and our lost purity again. >> I started thinking about mammonism and our lost innocence again.15.What I am actually saying is that I have a weak body. >> CORRECT16.I have no power to exercise. >> CORRECT OR >> I have no energy to exercise.