McDonald\'s BTS-meal frenzy sparks virus closures in Indonesia
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Do you know BTS Boy group?
Frankly, I don\'t know exactly about this group. I know their name and how many people consist of this group.
BTS is a abbreviations for Bang Tan Soyeondan. Meaning is very powerful boys group.
I think, they are more famous group in the world. in Korea, another group is more popular than BTS.
Today, Let\'s talk about them.
B.regards.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
See you in a bit in our class.
T. DON
Do you know BTS Boy group?
>> CORRECT
OR:
>> Do you know the boy group BTS?
Frankly, I don\'t know exactly about this group. I know their name and how many people consist of this group.
>> Frankly, I don\'t know exactly about this group. I know their names and how many people consists in this group.
BTS is a abbreviations for Bang Tan Soyeondan. Meaning is very powerful boys group.
>> BTS is an abbreviations for Bang Tan Soyeondan. The meaning is a very powerful boy\'s group.
I think, they are more famous group in the world. in Korea, another group is more popular than BTS.
>> I think, they are a famous boy group in the world. in Korea, another group is more popular than BTS.
Today, Let\'s talk about them.
>> CORRECT
B.regards.
>> CORRECT
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