Me too~
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree with your thinking.
I found that the vidio class is more difficult than the phone class.
Maybe,We are not used to be that and
There would is something mecanical problems.
I am going to change desktop computer from my laptop.
I want to tell you ~~
"Don't be afraid and disappointed"
I always appreciated your efforts.
Especally,I was impressive an imformation with Toress^^
Have a nice day~~
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [Name]!
Good afternoon! Thank you for taking time to write in our website again. I\'m grateful for the comforting message you gave me.^^ I can always feel that you are my mother. You see to it that I am comfortable when I talk to you.
Have a great day!---LENY----I agree with your thinking.
>> I agree with your idea.I found that the vidio class is more difficult than the phone class.
>> I found out that the video class is more difficult than phone class.Maybe,We are not used to be that and There would is something mecanical problems.
>> Maybe, we are not used to that and there are some mechanical problems.I am going to change desktop computer from my laptop.
>>I\'m going to change desk to a laptop computer.
I want to tell you ~~
>>Correct\"Don\'t be afraid and disappointed\"
>>CorrectI always appreciated your efforts.
>>Correct Especally,I was impressive an imformation with Toress^^
>>I was specially impressed with the information about Toress.
Have a nice day~~
>>Correct
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