Me too~

2012-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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I agree with your thinking. I found that the vidio class is more difficult than the phone class. Maybe,We are not used to be that and There would is something mecanical problems. I am going to change desktop computer from my laptop. I want to tell you ~~ "Don't be afraid and disappointed" I always appreciated your efforts. Especally,I was impressive an imformation with Toress^^ Have a nice day~~

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Hello there Ms. [Name]!      Good afternoon! Thank you for taking time to write in our website again. I\'m grateful for the comforting message you gave me.^^ I can always feel that you are my mother. You see to it that I am comfortable when I talk to you. Have a great day!---LENY----I agree with your thinking. >> I agree with your idea.I found that the vidio class is more difficult than the phone class. >> I found out that the video class is more difficult than phone class.Maybe,We are not used to be that and There would is something mecanical problems. >> Maybe, we are not used to that and there are some mechanical problems.I am going to change desktop computer from my laptop. >>I\'m going to change desk to a laptop computer. I want to tell you ~~ >>Correct\"Don\'t be afraid and disappointed\" >>CorrectI always appreciated your efforts. >>Correct Especally,I was impressive an imformation with Toress^^ >>I was specially impressed with the information about Toress. Have a nice day~~ >>Correct

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