Means of transprtation
학생이 쓴 원문
Are the same meaning of means of transportation and modes of transportation? Thank you :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Ye [이름]!
Yes, those two terms have the same meaning.
You can interchange the usage of both.
There were some familiar mistakes that I have corrected below.
Please review previous corrections so that you would not be repeating the same mistakes.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The diagram gives information about how many percentages of people use four means of transportation in Manchester.
>> The diagram gives information on the percentage of people using four means of transportation in Manchester.
At the same time, the table shows the reasons why people use the car in city.
>> At the same time, the table shows the reasons why people use cars in the city.
Through these information, people can
know which means of transportation are popular in Manchester and the reasons why people use the car.
>> Through this information, people can know which means of transportation is popular in Manchester and the reasons why people use cars.
There are two popular means of transportation in Manchester.
>> Correct
A car and LRT account for 80% in whole percentage.
>> A car and LRT account for 80% of the whole percentage.
However, the percentage of using a car is a little bit higher than using LRT by 10%.
>> Correct
The percentages of the bus and a taxi are the same with 10% which is a very lower percentage than the previous two transportation.
>> The percentages of the bus and taxi are the same at 10% which is a lower percentage than the previous two modes of transportation.
There are five reasons why people use the car in city.
>> There are five reasons why people use cars in the city.
The most popular reason is commuting to work with 55%.
>> The most popular reason is commuting to work at 55%.
The
reason for business come second with 45% but there is a small gap with the reason of taking children to school by 5%.
>> The reason for business come second at 45% but there is a small gap with the reason of taking children to school by 5%.
Shopping and leisure activities account for the same percentage and these are the lowest reasons with 15%.
>> Shopping and leisure activities account for the same percentage and these are the lowest reasons at 15%.
Through these information we can know that a lot of people use a care and LRT in Manchester and more than half of
the reason why people use the car is for commuting to work.
>> Through this information we can know that a lot of people use a car and LRT in Manchester and more than half of the reasons why people use cars is for commuting to work.
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