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2022-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Is it OK for teachers to follow students on social media? Of course it depends on contents and channels on social media. But as possible as we can, it is better for teachers do not follow students on social media. We need a reasonable distance between teachers and students because teachers are civil servents who have professionism. It is not good excessive privacy opening to each other.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름]!
I understand some teachers who follow their students on social media to show their support on the contents. However, a teacher must not excessively hit \"like, share or even a heart\" button or else, she will be labeled an active follower. And I totally agree with you that it is better not to follow students on social media to show professionalism and some privacy.
See you in class.
Aki~

Of course it depends on contents and channels on social media.
>>> Of course it depends on contents and channels on social media.

But as possible as we can, it is better for teachers do not follow students on social media.
>>> But as possible as we can, it is better for teachers not to follow students on social media.

We need a reasonable distance between teachers and students because teachers are civil servents who have professionism.
>>> We need a reasonable distance between teachers and students because teachers are civil servants who have professionalism.

It is not good excessive privacy opening to each other.
>>>  Privacy must still be intact, it is not good if they are open to each other excessively.

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