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I have more concern social change and world news than social media itself.
I need to understand the characteristicsand needs of the new generation as an educator.
For example, What they want to be or what kind of values they are pursuing to.
I try to learn and use new computer apps and more advanced technology in my life.
But I don\'t have interested in social media itself.
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Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for this. It is true that you will know one\'s personality based on what they support and turn on their interest. You really re an educator since you focused more on social changers than social media.
Have a good day
Aki~
I have more concern social change and world news than social media itself.
>>> I have more concerned about social change and world news than social media itself.
I need to understand the characteristics and needs of the new generation as an educator.
>> CORRECT!
For example, What they want to be or what kind of values they are pursuing to.
>>> example, What they want to be or what kind of values they are pursuing.
I try to learn and use new computer apps and more advanced technology in my life.
>> CORRECT!
But I don\'t have interested in social media itself.
>> But I don\'t have interest in social media itself.
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