Medical emergency
학생이 쓴 원문
We have faced with a severe pandemic of Corona. It has calmed down for several months, but it is spreading again now. There has been increasing number of students who are absent from schools or academies. After most students start their new semester, th number of positive patients is increasing. I am concerned about respread of Corona. I encouraged my students and instructors to wear masks.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
As I’ve mentioned in class, I read several articles regarding the resurgence of COVID-19 in Korea, and I can say that it is indeed a scary scenario, as we have experienced the worst possible outcomes. Hopefully, people will take it seriously and be cautious to avoid further spread of the virus.
- T. Caitlyn
We have faced with a severe pandemic of Corona.
>> We have faced a severe pandemic of COVID-19.
It has calmed down for several months, but it is spreading again now.
>> CORRECT
There has been increasing number of students who are absent from schools or academies.
>> There has been an increasing number of students who are absent from schools or academies.
After most students start their new semester, th number of positive patients is increasing.
>> After most students started their new semester, the number of positive cases is increasing.
I am concerned about respread of Corona.
>> I am concerned about the resurgence and respread of COVID-19.
I encouraged my students and instructors to wear masks.
>> CORRECT
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