Medicine and health care in the futrue

Hello [이름],

A wonderful Monday!

I hope you had a great weekend! Well, everything is constantly changing. For sure there will be great advances in medicine in the future. Hopefully though most of the changes will be for the better and not for the worse. By the way, I like your writing style.

Have a great day ahead,

~T. Lynn

Medicine and health care in the future will be develop much more than now.

>>Medicine and health care in the future will be much more develop compared to now.

A number of doctor increases and medical equipment develop, robot surgery will get better performance.

>> The number of doctors will increase and medical equipment will develop for instance robot surgery will get better performance.

Also medicine will be a better.

>>Also medicine will be better.

The effect of drug will get well.

>>correct

OR>> The effect of drug will get better.

Maybe one of medicine will treat cancer.

>>Maybe they will discover a medicine which will treat cancer.

Recently the field of medicine is introducing AI(artificial intelligence).

>>correct

It\'s big change in medical field.

>>It\'s A big change in the medical field.

AI have all data and statistics.

>>correct!

AI by medical data and statistics is classify the patients.
>> AI will classify the patients through their medical data and statistics.

 A operation is carry out by the robot.

>>An operation is carried out by the robot.

There was no inch of error. It\'s a very medical.

>>There is no inch of error. It\'s very TECHNICAL.

But AI and data and statistics don\'t have a sentiment and emotion.

>> But AI don\'t have sentiment and emotion.

It\'s a very important between a doctor and a patient.

>>It\'s very important between a doctor and a patient.

The doctor watch out a patient\'s condition and emotion, not see a sore spot.

>> The doctor watch out for the patient\'s condition and emotion.

That is a reason why a doctor be, even though medicine and health care will be change in the future.

>> That is the reason why doctors should operate even though medicine and health care will be changed in the future.