meet the new person.
학생이 쓴 원문
l like meet new people and I like talk them together.
When I go to new place, I try to get close to new person.
When I meet people in various fields, I can get knowledge that I don\'t know and have various experience.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kahlen!
Here\'s your corrected composition. I appreciate your sending it.
See you next week and have a happy weekend!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Do you like meeting new people?
l like meet new people and I like talk them together.
>>> I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them.
When I go to new place, I try to get close to new person.
>>> When I go to a new place, I try to get close to a new person.
When I meet people in various fields, I can get knowledge that I don\'t know and have various experience.
>>> When I meet people in various fields, I can get or learn knowledge that I don\'t know and have various experiences.
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