Meeting new people
학생이 쓴 원문
Meeting new people does not happen very frequently in my life. Most of the college students in Korea mostly make new friends in the class group works with other departments students. However my major, medicine doesn\'t have a class that I can engage with other department students. So students in my major gets really close to each other but rarely make new connection with the other department students.
If I meet new people, it\'s mostly at the church because its system is created that way. Groups are newly created in every semester and we talk about our lives and study bible together. The groups are intentionally created to meet different people from the previous groups by administrators. I get closer to new members of the group every semester which is about 6 months.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I love how you are actively engaging in opportunities to connect with others, even when your academic environment doesn’t lend itself to meeting new people. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
Meeting new people does not happen very frequently in my life. >>Correct!
Most of the college students in Korea mostly make new friends in the class group works with other departments students.
>>Most college students in Korea make new friends through group work with students from other departments.
However my major, medicine doesn\'t have a class that I can engage with other department students.
>>However, my major, medicine, doesn’t have any classes where I can interact with students from other departments.
So students in my major gets really close to each other but rarely make new connection with the other department students.
>>As a result, students in my major tend to get really close to each other but rarely make connections with students from other departments.If I meet new people, it\'s mostly at the church because its system is created that way.
>>If I meet new people, it’s mostly at church because the system is created that way.
Groups are newly created in every semester and we talk about our lives and study bible together.
>>New groups are created every semester, and we talk about our lives and study the Bible together.
The groups are intentionally created to meet different people from the previous groups by administrators.
>>The groups are intentionally organized so that we meet different people from previous groups, as arranged by the administrators.
I get closer to new members of the group every semester which is about 6 months.
>>I get closer to new members of the group every semester, which lasts about six months.
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