Membership training
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Our teachers and l have two membership trainings a year. We go to other cities in Korea or other countries. Through the short trips, we discuss all the problems Our academy face, plan new programs for students, or make timetable. Of course, we enjoy the trips, visiting attractions there. We also visit popular restaurants. Last year, we have been to the capital city of Malaysia.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I can imagine going on these membership trainings. I think it\'s a good way to build stronger connections with your employees, and at the same time, relax and enjoy each other\'s company and the place as well
- T. Caitlyn
Our teachers and l have two membership trainings a year.
>> CORRECT
We go to other cities in Korea or other countries.
>> CORRECT
Through the short trips, we discuss all the problems Our academy face, plan new programs for students, or make timetable.
>> Through the short trips, we discuss all the problems our academy faces, plan new programs for students, or make the timetable.
Of course, we enjoy the trips, visiting attractions there.
>> CORRECT
We also visit popular restaurants.
>> CORRECT
Last year, we have been to the capital city of Malaysia.
>> last year, we went to the capital city of Malaysia.
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