Memorable day
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My most memorable memory since becoming an adult was the day.
I was ended from the military
>>My most memorable memory since becoming an adult was the day I was discharged from the military.
As you know It is duty to go military in KOREA ,SO I volunteered for KOREA but
>>As you know, it is a duty to serve in the military in Korea, so I volunteered for it.
It was really hard day over a period of one and half years .
>>It was a really challenging period of one and a half years.
In the other words i can\'t forget the day i wait and wait
>>In other words, I can\'t forget the days I waited for it to end.
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