Memorable experience
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Firstly changing a company is the most affective experience to me since it has been giving me a second life.
>>Firstly, the most impactful experience for me has been the transition to a new company, as it has essentially granted me a second lease on professional life.
I had thought that the most important thing is accumulating a various of work capabilities and performances.
>>Correct.
However, after leaving the original company, I could experience a lot of activities by using time effectively.
>>However, upon departing from my original company, I found that effectively managing my time allowed me to engage in a variety of activities.
By this way, I have been maintaining both mental and physical health well and considering the options which can make me develop.
>>Correct.
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