Memorable experience during my colleague days
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My university is far from my home.
So I had to take a bus for 2 hours on weekdays so that It was hard to get the long hours for studying of colleague subject.
But I really wanted to get a good score in my major subject.
So I studied the subjects in the running bus.
I couldn’t study well before because It was difficult to focus on the contents in the bus.
But after time passes, I was able to focus the paper in the bus.
Consquently, I got the good scores!
After then, I realized that making an excuse is bad for my life.
If I have a passion, I can anything everywhere.
I want to become a person who don’t make an excuse anywhere, anytime.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing your experiences. Awesome work!
- T. Gabby.
My university is far from my home.
>> Correct.
So I had to take a bus for 2 hours on weekdays so that It was hard to get the long hours for studying of colleague subject.
>>So I had to take a bus for 2 hours on weekdays, that\'s why it was also hard to study for long number of hours.
But I really wanted to get a good score in my major subject.
>> Correct.
So I studied the subjects in the running bus.
>> So I studied some of my subjects in the running bus.
I couldn’t study well before because It was difficult to focus on the contents in the bus.
>> Correct.
But after time passes, I was able to focus the paper in the bus.
>> But as time passed by, I get used to it and learned how to focus on the content in the bus.
Consquently, I got the good scores!
>> Consequently, I got high scores!
After then, I realized that making an excuse is bad for my life.
>> After that, I realized that making excuses is not good for my life.
If I have a passion, I can anything everywhere.
>> If I have passion on something, I have to be able to do it anywhere.
I want to become a person who don’t make an excuse anywhere, anytime.
>> I want to become that person who doesn\'t make excuses anytime, anywhere.
- T. Gabby.
My university is far from my home.
>> Correct.
So I had to take a bus for 2 hours on weekdays so that It was hard to get the long hours for studying of colleague subject.
>>So I had to take a bus for 2 hours on weekdays, that\'s why it was also hard to study for long number of hours.
But I really wanted to get a good score in my major subject.
>> Correct.
So I studied the subjects in the running bus.
>> So I studied some of my subjects in the running bus.
I couldn’t study well before because It was difficult to focus on the contents in the bus.
>> Correct.
But after time passes, I was able to focus the paper in the bus.
>> But as time passed by, I get used to it and learned how to focus on the content in the bus.
Consquently, I got the good scores!
>> Consequently, I got high scores!
After then, I realized that making an excuse is bad for my life.
>> After that, I realized that making excuses is not good for my life.
If I have a passion, I can anything everywhere.
>> If I have passion on something, I have to be able to do it anywhere.
I want to become a person who don’t make an excuse anywhere, anytime.
>> I want to become that person who doesn\'t make excuses anytime, anywhere.
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