Memorable experience I have had in New Zealand
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Memorable experience I have had in New Zealand is when I saw the Maorian performance in Fairfield intermediate school.
I haven\'t heard about Maori culture before, but their song and dance was wonderful.
Almost 30 students(also including kiwi) showed Haka dance and sing traditional Maorian song, so it was mesmerizing view.
I also learned New Zealand Nation song, and I was surprised there was both Maorian and English lyrics.
Still nowadays, I love listening to Maorian song. My favorite songs are \'Te iwi e\',\'E noho tuheitia\'!
p.s.) Picture is the place in Hobbiton where I drink ginger beer. Sorry for low quality!
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Hi Hannah,
I haven\'t heard about Māori culture before, but their song and dance was wonderful.
Almost 30 students(also including kiwi) showed Haka dance and sing traditional Maorian song, so it was mesmerizing view.
I also learned New Zealand Nation song, and I was surprised there was both Maorian and English lyrics.
This is wonderful. Thanks for sharing! What does \'Te iwi e\',\'E noho tuheitia\'! mean?
-Teacher Ash
Memorable experience I have had in New Zealand is when I saw the Maorian performance in Fairfield intermediate school.
>> The most memorable experience I had in New Zealand is when I saw the Maorian performance in Fairfield Intermediate School.
I haven\'t heard about Māori culture before, but their song and dance was wonderful.
>> I haven\'t heard about Māori culture before, but their song and dance were wonderful.
Almost 30 students(also including kiwi) showed Haka dance and sing traditional Maorian song, so it was mesmerizing view.
>> Almost 30 students (including the Kiwi tribe) performed the Haka dance and sing traditional Maorian song, so it was a mesmerizing performance.
I also learned New Zealand Nation song, and I was surprised there was both Maorian and English lyrics.
>> I also learned New Zealand Nation song, and I was surprised that there were both Maorian and English lyrics.
Still nowadays, I love listening to Maorian song.
>> Still even today, I love listening to Maorian song.
My favorite songs are \'Te iwi e\',\'E noho tuheitia\'!
>> CORRECT!
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