Memory about my grandfather

2010-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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On July 28, wednesday It's annyversary of my garandfather's death. So I try to talk about my grandfather. He wasn't a lively and lusty person, whereas he was very decent and gentle. Unfortunately, I don't have many memories between he and I because I didn't visit my grandparents often since I was a kid. Still, his imagine was always taciturn and gentle in my memory. Of course my grandma and our family feel stuffy because of his nature but we respected him. What he said within an inch of his life was that "This is for you." and he slipped some money into my hand. That money was very crumpled. I miss you~

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]..I suddenly remember about my grandmother’s death. That’s why we need to cherish every person in our life. We should spend time with our love ones no matter how busy we are because we don’t know what will happen next to our life.:)Hopefully, you are doing ok now.   On July 28, wednesday It's annyversary of my garandfather's death. >>>Last July 28, Wednesday, it was my grandfather’s death anniversary. So I try to talk about my grandfather. >>>So, I tried to talk about my grandfather. He wasn't a lively and lusty person, whereas he was very decent and gentle. >>>correct!!! Unfortunately, I don't have many memories between he and I because I didn't visit my grandparents often since I was a kid. >>>Unfortunately, I don’t have many memories with my grandfather because I don’t visit my grandparents often when I was a kid. Still, his imagine was always taciturn and gentle in my memory. >>>Still, his image is always a taciturn and gentle in my memory. Of course my grandma and our family feel stuffy because of his nature but we respected him. >>>correct!!! What he said within an inch of his life was that "This is for you." and he slipped some money into my hand. That money was very crumpled. >>>correct!!! I miss you~ >>>correct!!!

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