Men and women are equal.

2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I think men and women are equal and so women and men can do any job they want. There are some occupations that specific sex choose, for example, nurses, teachers, engineer. But it can not explain that there are certain jobs which are suitable for men or women. Because women and men can be famous and exellent if they do their best. There are top female and male nurses, teachers, engineers.

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T. Anne^^

I think men and women are equal and so women and men can do any job they want.
>>I think men and women are equal so women and men can do any job that they want.
There are some occupations that specific sex choose, for example, nurses, teachers, engineer.
>>There are some occupations that both men and women can do, for example; being a nurse, a teacher and an engineer.
But it can not explain that there are certain jobs which are suitable for men or women.
>>Men and women can have their own choices when it comes to their jobs.
Because women and men can be famous and exellent if they do their best.
>>CORRECT!
There are top female and male nurses, teachers, engineers.
>>There are top female and male nurses, teachers and engineers nowadays.

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