Men's child care

Hi there Mr. [이름]! ^_^

Thank you very much for writing in our composition board.

I find your thoughts and opinions in this matter really relevant.

It\'s because as a father, you know how it\'s like to be away from your children all the time.

You know the relevance of co-caring and co-parenting.

I\'m looking forward to more essays from you. ^_^

Have a great day ahead.

~Teacher Charry

Thesedays women are busy taking care of their children.

>> These days, women are busy taking care of their children.
So they can\'t have time for them. 

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So the fathers don\'t have the time for them.
I think that men must help women.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think that husbands should help their wives.
Some companies offer fathers to stay home, to take care of their newborns.

>> Some companies offer fathers to stay home to take care of their newborns.
That is a good policy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That policy is great.

Of course income is important. 

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Of course earning for a living is important.
co-caring for children is better than income.

>> Co-caring for children is better than income.
The relationship between husband and wife is increasing.

>> The relationship between husband and wife is improving.