Men still make more money than women for similar work.
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1. The company has the boss men more than woman so make a lot of money and risk job has their also, so getting opportunity.
>> There are more male company bosses than females and that makes them make more money and gain more job opportunities.
2. Women getting married or. have a baby stops working and lose their got promotion . behind one\'s carrier.
>> Women who get married or have babies stop working and lose their chance for promotion. They leave behind their careers.
3.professionals has job still men more than women.
>> There are more male professionals than females.
4. If Women move to follow to her husband lose to getting her job but. husband it\'s not
>> If women move and follow their husbands, they lose their jobs but their husbands don\'t.
5. women need to think about children.
>> Women need to think about children.
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