Men still make more money than women for similar work.

2020-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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1. The company has the boss men more than woman so make a lot of money and risk job has their also, so getting opportunity. 2. Women getting married or. have a baby stops working and lose their got promotion . behind one\'s carrier. 3.professionals has job still men more than women. 4. If Women move to follow to her husband lose to getting her job but. husband it\'s not 5. women need to think about children.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]! :)
Thank you for taking the time to answer our homework.
We were not able to study together today but I hope you\'re doing great today.

See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Charry

1. The company has the boss men more than woman so make a lot of money and risk job has their also, so getting opportunity.
>> There are more male company bosses than females and that makes them make more money and gain more job opportunities.
2. Women getting married or. have a baby stops working and lose their got promotion . behind one\'s carrier.
>> Women who get married or have babies stop working and lose their chance for promotion. They leave behind their careers.
3.professionals has job still men more than women.
>> There are more male professionals than females.
4. If Women move to follow to her husband lose to getting her job but. husband it\'s not
>> If women move and follow their husbands, they lose their jobs but their husbands don\'t.
5. women need to think about children.

>> Women need to think about children.

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