mental health
학생이 쓴 원문
I am very sad that read this article.
I know very well related to news similar to this survey.
I think even we devise supporting policies for out-of-school children, it can\'t solve Korea\'s education chronic disease.
Out-of-school students are just one symptom in education parts.
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I am very sad that read this article.
\\>>> I felt sad upon reading this article.
>>> I am very sad when I read (red) this article.
I know very well related to news similar to this survey.
>>> I know a lot of news related to this survey.
>>> I know a lot of news similar to this issue.
I think even we devise supporting policies for out-of-school children, it can\'t solve Korea\'s education chronic disease.
I think even we devise supporting policies for out-of-school children, it can\'t solve Korea\'s education chronic disease.
>>> I thin even when we revise the polices for out-of-school children, it can\'t solve Korea\'s education chronic disease.
Out-of-school students are just one symptom in education parts.
Out-of-school students are just one symptom in education parts.
>>> Out-of-school students are just one symptom in education area.
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