Mention a reason why people are blessed to have you.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are a few reasons why people are blessed to have you.
First of all, blessing has a positive effect on all the people. It make people happy and be confident to anything. For example, if you are blessing to person who have to take a test, the person will be confident and take a test more comfortable. your mention can change a person.
second, Blessed words can better connect with the people around you. Positive conversation creates positive relationships with people. For example, A good conversation like a blessing can be a wonderful relationship even if you meet someone for the first time.
Therefor, people should be blessed to the others.
강사 첨삭
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>> There are few reasons why people are blessed to have me.
First of all, blessing has a positive effect on all the people.
>> First of all, a blessing has a positive effect on all the people.
It make people happy and be confident to anything.
>> It makes people happy and be confident to do anything.
For example, if you are blessing to person who have to take a test, the person will be confident and take a test more comfortable. your mention can change a person. second, Blessed words can better connect with the people around you.
>> For example, if you are a blessing to a person, the person will be confident and take a test more comfortably. Your words can change a person and a persons mind.
>> Second, blessed words can be better to use in connecting with people around you.
Positive conversation creates positive relationships with people.
>> Positive conversation creates positive relationships with people.
For example, A good conversation like a blessing can be a wonderful relationship even if you meet someone for the first time.
>> For example, a good conversation is a blessing that can be a wonderful for relationships even if you meet someone for the first time.
>> Therefore, people should be a blessing to others.
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