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학생이 쓴 원문
Salary gap between jobs should be balanced and reduce the number of universities not necessary for society.
Instead of several subsidies and unemplyment benifis, we provide to training course to learn skill for young people.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
I read an article once about university courses and one of the writers mentioned what you have written. A university should be overhauled That they should study well which courses should be offered to students to become productive workers in the future.
Good day ahead!
Aki~
Salary gap between jobs should be balanced and reduce the number of universities not necessary for society.
>>> The salary gap between jobs should be balanced and reduce the number of universities not necessary in society.
Instead of several subsidies and unemplyment benifis, we provide to training course to learn skill for young people.
>>> Instead of several subsidies and unemployment benefits, we provide training courses to learn skills for young people.
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