middle school
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the 16th of 2012 , thursday , wheather is cold
in 2011 ,september i want to go ho-sung middle school
but my mom always said "you should go to gi-ren middle school"to me
but my almost friend are go to ho-sung middle school and i know many people in ho-sung middle school
so i will go to ho-sung middle school but hosung - middle school is dirty and old
gi-rin middle school is very clean but it is very far from my house and gi-rin's students
are very bad
so i had a big problem
but in 2012 feberary i solved this problem ^^
i will go to ho-sung middle school because my friend is better than middle school
ho-sung middle school is not far from my house
and i will go to school with my friends
i think i select ho-sung middle school is very nice
the end
thank you for reading my diary
강사 첨삭
Hi Peter,
Thank you for sharing your diary to me. I think you really had a good choice with your school. Even thou it\'s dirty and old but still you can keep your friends there.I hope to read more from you. See you Tomorrow!
T.Sheela
the 16th of 2012 , thursday , wheather is cold
>>The date 16th of February 2012, Thursday. The weather is cold.in 2011 ,september i want to go ho-sung middle school
>>Last September 2011, I went to Ho-Sung Middle School.but my mom always said \"you should go to gi-ren middle school\"to me
>>But my mom always say,\" You should go to Gi-Ren Middle School\", to me.but my almost friend are go to ho-sung middle school and i know many people in ho-sung middle school
>>Bu most of my friends went to Ho-Sung Middle School and I know many people in Ho-Sung Middle School.so i will go to ho-sung middle school but hosung - middle school is dirty and old
>> That\'s why I went to Ho-Sung Middle School but Ho-Sung Middle School is dirty and it\'s an old School.gi-rin middle school is very clean but it is very far from my house and gi-rin\'s studentsare very bad
>>Gi-Rin Middle School is very clean but it\'s very far from my house and Gi-Rin\'s students are very bad.so i had a big problem
>>So, it was a big problem to me.
>>OR So, it was my big problem.but in 2012 feberary i solved this problem ^^
>>But in February 2012, I solved this problem.i will go to ho-sung middle school because my friend is better than middle school
>>I will got o Ho-Sung Middle School because my friend says it a more better school than Gi-Rin\'s School.ho-sung middle school is not far from my house
>>Ho-Sung Middle School is not far from my house.and i will go to school with my friends
>>And I will go to school with my friends. i think i select ho-sung middle school is very nice
>>I think I choose Ho-Sung Middle School because it\'s very nice.>>OR I think I had a good choice in Choosing Ho-Sung Middle School because it\'s a very nice school.the end
>>The End.thank you for reading my diary
>>Thank you for reading my diary.
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