middle school

2012-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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i am middle school student i missed elementry school because elementry school finished at 3'o clock but middle school finish at 5'o clock and middle school is so far and i should get up early but middle schoolhas good things first, rice is very delicious and class is funny and iam math leader and i get AAA from math,science,activiti,english and korean i am so glad to get good score and i have many friends friends are so kind so today i think middle school is better than elementry school

강사 첨삭

Hi Peter, I am so proud of you! You\'re a smart kid! I\'m glad to know that you have many friends. They will be helping you in many ways. Just keep up the good performance! T.Sheela i am middle school student >>I am a middle school student.i missed elementry school because elementry school finished at 3\'o clock >> I missed the Elementary school because they finish class  at 3\' o clock.but middle school finish at 5\'o clock and middle school is so far >> But middle school finish at 5 o\'clock. Middle school is so far.and i should get up early but middle schoolhas good things >>So, I should get up early. But there are good things about Middle school.first, rice is very delicious and class is funny >>First, the rice is very delicious and our class is funny.and iam math leader and i get AAA from math,science,activiti,english and korean >>Since I am the math leader, I got an AAA score in Math, Science, Activities, English and Korean.i am so glad to get good score >>I am so glad because I got a good score.and i have many friends friends are so kind so today i think middle school is better than elementry school >> I have many friends and they were so kind. That\'s why today, I think middle school is better than Elementary school.

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