MIddle School

2013-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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The day before friday was my last day of in the elementary. And I"m going to go middle school next month. I a little bit nervous but excited. I liked the school uniform. It looks good on me. And I'm going to go to middle school next wednesday. ON that day the school people give books like science,korean and so on. And I woule know my class. I hope my friends would be a same class with me. Hummmmmmmm.... Have a nice day teacher. maybe teacher diamonds I think so.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!!! A pleasant Monday morning~~ I am glad to receieve a composition from you. :) Maybe there are a lot of questions coupled with excitement as you wait for your middle school days. ^^ It\'ll be a great time to start another milestone in life! Anyway, please check the corrections I made dear! :) Be careful with spellings and capitalizations. Have a nice day and see you~~ T.Kristel :) The day before friday was my last day of in the elementary. >>The day before Friday was my last day in the elementary.And I\"m going to go middle school next month. >>I\'m going to Middle school next monthI a little bit nervous but excited. >>I am a little bit nervous but excited at the same time.I liked the school uniform. >>CORRECT!!It looks good on me. >>CORRECT!!And I\'m going to go to middle school next wednesday.>>I\'m going to Middle school next Wednesday. ON that day the school people give books like science,korean and so on.>>On that day, students will be receiving books in Science, Korean and so on.And I woule know my class. >>And I would know my class.I hope my friends would be a same class with me. >>I hope my friends would be in the same class with me.Hummmmmmmm....>>CORRECT!!Have a nice day teacher. >>CORRECT!!maybe teacher diamonds I think so. >>I think teachers are maybe diamonds.  

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