Middle School student clothes

2017-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I bought a middle school student clothes last week.I have to wear middle school clothes on March 2nd.Middle school student clothes is not wonderful.I like my clothes than middle school student clothes.I bought 2 Y-Shrit,1T-Shirt,2 pants and 1 jacket.Middle school student clothes make my height lower.I think student clothes is uncomfortable.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I think we can\'t do anything about that because it\'s the school\'s policy.

You have to follow the school\'s policy my dear.

I want to see you wearing those clothes or uniforms. kkk

Anyway, have a happy weekend!

See you again on Tuesday!


_Teacher Dianne


I bought a middle school student clothes last week.

>> I bought clothes for entering the middle school last week.

>> or: I bought uniforms for my middle school last week.

I have to wear middle school clothes on March 2nd.

>> I have to wear clothes for middles school starting on March 2.

Middle school student clothes is not wonderful.I like my clothes than middle school student clothes.

>> The clothes for middle school students are not nice. I like my clothes more at home than my middle school clothes.

I bought 2 Y-Shrit,1T-Shirt,2 pants and 1 jacket.

>> I bought 2 Y-shirts, a T-shirt, and a jacket.

Middle school student clothes make my height lower.

>> The clothes make my height lower or decreased.

>> Or: The clothes make me shorter.

I think student clothes is uncomfortable.

>> I think students clothes are uncomfortable.

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