midlife crisis
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I don\'t feel stressed or frightened in midlife crisis yet as there is much time to be middle age from now.
>>I haven\'t felt stressed or frightened about midlife crisis yet, as there is still much time before reaching middle age.
However, I think I need to prepare many things in advance to not feel any fear.
>>However, I think I need to prepare for many things in advance to not feel any fear.
I will have hobbies that I can enjoy continuosly in middle age, invest to gather money for non-working life.
>>I will prepare for hobbies that I can enjoy continuously and invest to accumulate funds for non-working life.
Additionally, the most important thing is the belief that I live with productivity.
>>In addition, the most important thing is maintaining a belief in living with productivity.
Preparing and planning for midlife is needed to consider from now since expected lifespan is increased.
>>Preparing and planning for midlife needs to be considered nowadays since the expected lifespan has increased.
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