Mind makes everything!
학생이 쓴 원문
I’m a Buddihist. So I’m trying to learn about Budda’s teaching and his saying everyday. Among those ‘Mind makes everything!’ is the strongest for me these days. If I think about My past life, all pain, anger, sadness, jealousy even happiness were originated from my mind and selfishness not others. So, these days I’m trying to realize of this fact and at the moment I can realize it I can be comfort.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ju [이름]!
Napoleon Hill once said, \"The body achieves what the mind believes.\"
This statement highlights the strong mind-body connection and implies that having a positive outlook and a strong belief in one\'s objectives are crucial for physical success because they affect the drive, perseverance, and resolve to overcome challenges and accomplish desired results.
It emphasizes how action is driven by conviction, dedication, and focus, which makes challenging activities attainable.
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I’m a Buddihist. So I’m trying to learn about Budda’s teaching and his saying everyday.
>>> I\'m a Buddhist, so I\'m trying to learn about Buddha\'s teachings and his sayings every day.
Among those ‘Mind makes everything!’ is the strongest for me these days.
>>> Among those, \'Mind makes everything!\' is the strongest for me these days.
If I think about My past life, all pain, anger, sadness, jealousy even happiness were originated from my mind and selfishness not others.
>>> If I think about my past life, all pain, anger, sadness, jealousy, and even happiness originated from my mind and selfishness, not others.
So, these days I’m trying to realize of this fact and at the moment I can realize it I can be comfort.
>>> So, these days I\'m trying to realize this fact, and the moment I can realize it, I can be comfortable.
>>> OR: So, these days, I\'m trying to accept this fact, and once I do, I\'ll be able to relax.
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