Miracle
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Jay!(\",)
Like you said, it\'s a miracle that we are alive. Miracles happen every where and whenever we hear or see stories about people witnessing a miracle, it touches us. It gives hope to people who are suffering.(\",)
~Lynn
A miracle isn\'t far away from us because I think every moment of our lives is a miracle.
>> correct!
I know there are many incidents just around our lives and also there are many casulaties or the dead.
>> I know there are many incidents happening around us. There are many casualties or death every day.
It is prominent for our subject of the class about Gangleung pension.
>> This is connected to our topic in class today about Gangneung pension.
Many people go on a trip with their friend or family often, but they don\'t know what will happen to them.
>> Many people go on a trip with their friends or family often, but they don\'t know what will happen to them.
These ten students also didn\'t know this incident will occur.
>> correct!
We need to appreciate for living now and must know how important we can live with whom we love.
>> We need to appreciate our lives now and we must realize how lucky we are that we can live with our love ones.
These days, I\'m reading or watching news more than ever and I could learn and feel many things by doing it.
>> correct!
And then it is good for me to organize my thougth for like these topics. I appreciate everything I am experiencing
>> This is a good way for me to learn how to organize my thoughts better. I appreciate everything I\'m experiencing now.
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