Misjudgement

2013-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Before answering this question, I’d like to talk about misjudgment of my acquaintance. Some people who I have ever met said that I looks a little scary. but as time goes on, They said it was misjudgment. As a result and As I referred earlier, I didn’t pre-estimate so much because an appearance is just an appearance. But I have a one memory of misjudgment. In my case, 6 or 7 years ago, I met a man. The first impression of him is not good. He was handsome and had a expressionless face. Beside, he looked pale. So I think he must have a cold liver. but as I know a lot about him, I know he is a good guy. now He is a my best friend.

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A rainy afternoon to you Steve! How are you doing? Still writing resumes?   I hope that your day is good today because youe were able to wrie many. kkkk Anyway, let\'s go back to your composition. And I have a question, what do you mean by \"cold liver\"? Actually I didn\'t get what you mean. So please enlighten me. I will see you then tomorrow so give me your answer. See yah!   Always, Kathrine  ^^   Before answering this question, I’d like to talk about misjudgment of my acquaintance. >> Before answering this question, I\'d like to talk about the misjudgment of my  acquaintance.  Some people who I have ever met said that I looks a little scary. >>  Some people whom I met for the first time said that I look a little scary. but as time goes on, They said it was misjudgment. >> But as time goes by, they said it was a misjudgment. As a result and As I referred earlier, I didn’t pre-estimate so much because an appearance is just an appearance. >> correct!But I have a one memory of misjudgment. >> But I have a memory about misjudging. In my case, 6 or 7 years ago, I met a man. >> correct! The first impression of him is not good. >> My first impression about him was not good. He was handsome and had a expressionless face. >> He was handsome but has an expressionless face. Beside, he looked pale. >> Beside, he looked pale. So I think he must have a cold liver. >> correct! but as I know a lot about him, I know he is a good guy. >> But as I have known a lot about him, I know that he is a good guy. now He is a my best friend. >> Now, he is my best friend.

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