Misjudgement
학생이 쓴 원문
Before answering this question, I’d like to talk about misjudgment of my acquaintance. Some people who I have ever met said that I looks a little scary. but as time goes on, They said it was misjudgment.
As a result and As I referred earlier, I didn’t pre-estimate so much because an appearance is just an appearance.
But I have a one memory of misjudgment.
In my case, 6 or 7 years ago, I met a man. The first impression of him is not good. He was handsome and had a expressionless face. Beside, he looked pale. So I think he must have a cold liver. but as I know a lot about him, I know he is a good guy. now He is a my best friend.
강사 첨삭
A rainy afternoon to you Steve!
How are you doing? Still writing resumes?
I hope that your day is good today because youe were able to wrie many. kkkk
Anyway, let\'s go back to your composition.
And I have a question, what do you mean by \"cold liver\"?
Actually I didn\'t get what you mean. So please enlighten me.
I will see you then tomorrow so give me your answer. See yah!
Always, Kathrine ^^
Before answering this question, I’d like to talk about misjudgment of my acquaintance.
>> Before answering this question, I\'d like to talk about the misjudgment of my acquaintance.
Some people who I have ever met said that I looks a little scary.
>> Some people whom I met for the first time said that I look a little scary.
but as time goes on, They said it was misjudgment.
>> But as time goes by, they said it was a misjudgment. As a result and As I referred earlier, I didn’t pre-estimate so much because an appearance is just an appearance.
>> correct!But I have a one memory of misjudgment.
>> But I have a memory about misjudging. In my case, 6 or 7 years ago, I met a man.
>> correct!
The first impression of him is not good.
>> My first impression about him was not good.
He was handsome and had a expressionless face.
>> He was handsome but has an expressionless face.
Beside, he looked pale.
>> Beside, he looked pale.
So I think he must have a cold liver.
>> correct!
but as I know a lot about him, I know he is a good guy.
>> But as I have known a lot about him, I know that he is a good guy.
now He is a my best friend.
>> Now, he is my best friend.
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