Misreported situation
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I've read about that one tribe adopted Korean language as their official one since it is good for record. Korean is a phonogram so that it has the same way bewteen how to speak and how to write. According to today's article, the report is not true since the Indonesian goverment mandates all tribes to keep one language in order to unite the whole contury. All tribes are using Latin characters to write their own tribal language. Meanwhile, the tribe is trying to learn many foreign lauguages such as Chinese and Japanese not just Korean. In fact, they are fine with latin character. So, in my opinion, they don't need to learn Korean just for writing.
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I've read about that one tribe adopted Korean language as their official one since it is good for record.
>>> I've read about a tribe that adopted the Korean language as their official language since it is good for the record.
Korean is a phonogram so that it has the same way bewteen how to speak and how to write.
>>> Korean is phonogramic, so it is the same way on how to speak and how to write it.
According to today's article, the report is not true since the Indonesian goverment mandates all tribes to keep one language in order to unite the whole contury.
>>> According to today’s article, the report is not true since the Indonesian government mandates all tribes to keep one language in order to unite the whole country.
All tribes are using Latin characters to write their own tribal language.
>>> Correct.
Meanwhile, the tribe is trying to learn many foreign lauguages such as Chinese and Japanese not just Korean.
>>> Meanwhile, the tribe is trying to learn many foreign languages, such as Chinese and Japanese, not just Korean.
In fact, they are fine with latin character.
>>> In fact, they are good with Latin characters.
So, in my opinion, they don't need to learn Korean just for writing.
>> So, in my opinion, they don’t need to learn Korean just for writing.
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