Missed investments
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I have missed opportunities to earn big money. What I regret the most is that I sold my mom\'s house. At that time her Parkinson disease grew worse, so I persuaded her to come to my house. I hesitated to sell her apartment because the price was lower than before. Additionally I wanted to buy a lower apartment for investment for my daughters. But my mom wanted to sell and give a down-payment for my house. After selling it, the price of the apartment has risen a lot.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Gi [이름]!
I\'d like to agree with you when you said that this situation is a missed opportunity. Nowadays, the prices of real estate have skyrocketed, so those who own properties are secure, but those who don\'t struggle a lot. Hopefully, we won\'t have missed opportunities in the future.
- T. Caitlyn
I have missed opportunities to earn big money.
>> CORRECT
What I regret the most is that I sold my mom\'s house.
>> CORRECT
At that time her Parkinson disease grew worse, so I persuaded her to come to my house.
>> At that time, her Parkinson\'s disease grew worse, so I persuaded her to come to my house.
I hesitated to sell her apartment because the price was lower than before.
>> CORRECT
Additionally I wanted to buy a lower apartment for investment for my daughters.
>> Additionally, I wanted to buy a cheaper apartment as an investment for my daughters.
But my mom wanted to sell and give a down-payment for my house.
>> But my mom wanted to sell her house and use the down-payment to stay in my house.
After selling it, the price of the apartment has risen a lot.
>> CORRECT
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