Missing My Mother (8/10)

Hi, Lara. We went to Dachean beach in the west sea. It took 3 hours including breakfast in the rest area. We woke up at 6 a.m. and started at 7 o'clock. When our family arrived at the beach, it was quiet. I thought there were many people in the beach. But the weather was not settled, in other words the sky was overcast. My siblings who were my brother and sister came there at noon. We went together to the place where my mother was buried 2 weeks ago. My mother was born in 1935. She was the fourth daughter of the rich man who was my maternal grandfather. She married the poor man who is my father after the Korean War when she was 18 years old. I will say about this. See you.

Hi Bobby!! A pleasant morning to you.. It's a good thing that you sent this mail in an earlier time. I definitely got a chance to edit this on my free time. We'll talk about this tomorrow. Take care.   Hi, Lara.>> Hi LaraWe went to Dachean beach in the west sea. >> We went to Dachean beach located in the west sea.It took 3 hours including breakfast in the rest area. >> It took us 3 hours ride, including a stop-over for a breakfast.We woke up at 6 a.m. and started at 7 o'clock. >> We woke up at 6 a.m and started at 7 o'clock.When our family arrived at the beach, it was quiet. >> When our family arrived at the beach, it was serene.I thought there were many people in the beach. >> I thought there were many people in the beach.But the weather was not settled, in other words the sky was overcast. >> But the weather was not fair, in other words the sky was overcated with dark clouds.My siblings who were my brother and sister came there at noon. >> My siblings, who were my brother and sister, came there at noon.We went together to the place where my mother was buried 2 weeks ago. >> We went together to the place where my mother was buried 2 weeks ago.My mother was born in 1935. >> Correct She was the fourth daughter of the rich man who was my maternal grandfather. >> She was the fourth daughter of a rich man, who was my grandfather.She married the poor man who is my father after the Korean War when she was 18 years old.>> She married a poor man, who is my father, after the Korean war ended. She was 18 years old then.I will say about this. >> I will discuss about this.See you. >> Correct