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2023-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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1. acquaintance - there are a lot of acquaintances around us But in my case i don’t try to know them deeper - i really hope we are not acquaintances to Each other 2. satisfaction - there is no satisfaction when it comes to Money - i might have satisfaction if i could go on a date with her 3. inevitably - this accident happen inevitaby. Don’t push yourself. - all beginners of company inevitably make a mistakes. Don’t worry about that a lot

강사 첨삭

I am impressed, [이름]! You did not only provide one sample sentences but two. Improving your skills can only happen through consistent practice. The more practice you put in, the faster you will see progress.-Faith-

1. acquaintance

>> CORRECT
- there are a lot of acquaintances around us But in my case i don’t try to know them deeper

>> There are a lot of acquaintances around me, but I don’t try to know them deeper.
- i really hope we are not acquaintances to

>> I really hope we are not acquaintances to each other.
2. satisfaction

>> CORRECT
- there is no satisfaction when it comes to Money

>> There is no satisfaction when it comes to money.
- i might have satisfaction if i could go on a date with her

>> I might have satisfaction if i could go on a date with her.
3. inevitably

>> CORRECT
- this accident happen inevitaby.

>> This accident happened inevitably.

Don’t push yourself.

>> CORRECT
- all beginners of company inevitably make a mistakes.

>> All beginners of companies inevitably make a mistake.

OR It is an unavoidable truth that novice employees in organizations are prone to making errors.

Don’t worry about that a lot

>> However, don’t worry about that a lot.

OR There\'s no need to excessively worry about that.

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