mistake
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a mistake yesterday,
My teacher asked me Korean paper money.
I explained the fifty thousand won and i had a mistake.
I said this money paper had fifty thousand pictures.
My meaning was not it. But my sentence was not clear.
So I'm trying to explain the fifty thousand won paper money's picture.
The Won is korean money's unit.
There is a woman in the fifty thousand won's picture.
She's name is Sin-sa-im-dang.
She was one of the korean woman who is a painter,poet, calligraphy.
She is mother who raise up a sun, yi-yi.
Yi-Yi is in five thousand won paper money.
I'm happy so that i introduce a respectable Korean woman in this place.
강사 첨삭
Hello Susan!
Thank you for making a composition. Thank you for explaining that to me. See you tomorrow!
T.Faye
Here are some of your corrections:
I had a mistake yesterday,>>I made a mistake yesterday.My teacher asked me Korean paper money.>>My teacher was asking me about Korean paper money.I explained the fifty thousand won and i had a mistake.>>I explained to her about the fifty thousand won and I made a mistake.I said this money paper had fifty thousand pictures.>>I said it had fifty thousand pictures.My meaning was not it.
>>That was not what I meant.
But my sentence was not clear.>>Correct!So I'm trying to explain the fifty thousand won paper money's picture.>>I was trying to explain the picture on the fifty thousand won.The Won is korean money's unit.>>Won is Korean's money unit.There is a woman in the fifty thousand won's picture.>>There is a picture of a woman on the fifty thousand won bill.She's name is Sin-sa-im-dang.>>Her name is Sin-sa-im-dang.She was one of the korean woman who is a painter,poet, calligraphy.>>She is a painter, poet, and calligrapher.She is mother who raise up a sun, yi-yi.>>She is a mother who raised a son named Yi-yi.Yi-Yi is in five thousand won paper money.>>Yi-yi is on the five thousand won bill.I'm happy so that i introduce a respectable Korean woman in this place.
>>I'm so happy to share something about a respectable woman in Korea.
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