mistake that I don\'t want to make again

2022-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

The mistake I made that I didn\'t want to happen again is to make no effort. Because I missed a lot of things because I didn\'t try. So I\'ll do my best in everything to make sure this never happens again!

강사 첨삭

Hi Chloe!

Yes, we need to grab opportunities when they are available because it can change our lives for the better. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

The mistake I made that I didn\'t want to happen again is to make no effort.

>> The mistake that I don\'t want to happen anymore is making no effort.

Because I missed a lot of things because I didn\'t try.

>> It\'s because I missed a lot of things because I didn\'t try it.

So I\'ll do my best in everything to make sure this never happens again!

>> CORRECT

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