mixed rice
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Tommorrow at school there is a class making mixed rice.I will make kimchi mixed rice.It is tasty.It costs just 2dollar when I go to restaurant and order kimchi meat mixed rice.It's a little tasty but not very full.
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Hi, [이름]!
Good luck in making kimchi mixed rice!
Make it the best, okay?
Oh, I haven\'t tasted this food, but I hope someday I\'ll be able to taste it.
See you next week!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Tommorrow at school there is a class making mixed rice.
>> There will be a class on making mixed rice at school tomorrow.
I will make kimchi mixed rice.
>> correct
It is tasty.
>> correct
It costs just 2dollar when I go to restaurant and order kimchi meat mixed rice.
>> It costs just 2 dollars when I go to a restaurant and order kimchi meat mixed rice.
It\'s a little tasty but not very full.
>> It\'s a little tasty but not very satisfying.
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