Mobile phone

My dad and mum have new smart phone and thry are cool. You can search in internets and you can play games. My sister have little phonw where you can just ring.I want to have new smart phone when I get older.I can play games with my friends and talk with them. We have or mobie phone at our house which you have to pay each when you ring one time so my mum usually says to don't use that phone. Because we have to pay much. It is my hope that I will have a mew phone.

Hi MIN!:) Happy Monday!   That is why I told you to do well in school so your parents won\'t be disappointed. They\'ll be delighted instead. And of course it\'s possible that they\'ll reward you for your hardwork. But then nowadays, it is important to have a mobile phone for communication purpose, not only entertainment such as games^_- You said they might give you one when you enter the fifth grade of elementary. Thank you for this composition, Min. I read it well.:) See you in class.   =T. Mayleen=   My dad and mum have new smart phone and thry are cool. >> My parents have new smartphones and they\'re cool.   You can search in internets and you can play games. >> You can use it to search the internet and you can play games, too.   My sister have little phonw where you can just ring. >> My sister has a small phone which can only be used for calls.   I want to have new smart phone when I get older. >> I want to have a new smart phone too when I get older.   I can play games with my friends and talk with them. >> So I can play games and talk to my friends using it.   We have or mobie phone at our house which you have to pay each when you ring one time so my mum usually says to don\'t use that phone. >> We have a mobile phone at home which you have to pay for every ring so my mom usually says not to use it.   Because we have to pay much. >> Because we\'ll have to pay a lot. It is my hope that I will have a mew phone. >> It is my wish to have a new phone.