Mobile shopping
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How could it be the most popular way to do mobile shopping.
>> How could it be the most popular way of mobile shopping?
I would like to find the reason from the development of IT technology.
>> correct!
The development of IT technology make smartphone user easy to purchase something they need.
>> The development of IT technology makes smartphone users easy to purchase something they need.
They can pay the bill easily and find the most reasonable price any time any where they are through the apps.
>> They can pay the bills easily and find the most reasonable price any time and any where they are through the apps.
The apps developer are prompt in dealing with the changes of the shopper\'s demand.
>> The apps developers are prompt in dealing with the changes of the shopper\'s demand.
And it makes the mobile shopper to be used to purchase something by the smartphone.
>> And it makes the mobile shopper purchase something on the smartphone.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.