Modern communication tools
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of the modern communication tools compared to the traditional ones? Modern communication tools are more comfortable to use than the traditional ones. But, there isn\'t personal touch in modern communication tools.
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Hey Justin! don\'t forget to curl you tongue and slowly release air creating vibration that results to an R sound by the way, here\'s grammatical way of writing your answer. T. Linda
Modern communication tools are more comfortable to use than the traditional ones. But, there isn\'t personal touch in modern communication tools.
Modern communication tools are more comfortable to use than the traditional ones. But, there isn\'t personal touch in modern communication tools.
>>>Modern communication tools are more comfortable to use than the traditional ones. But there isn\'t personal touch in modern communication tools.
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