Modification
학생이 쓴 원문
The electric engineer pointed out that the electric heater was at risk of fire.
so, Ceiling type elec. unit heater should be deleted at hallway at 8sets.
I need de-modification.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daniel! ^-^)
Thank you so much for this composition.
I don\'t really know much about engineering nor its technical terms, but I tried my best to modify your sentences.^^
I will see you later in class. Good afternoon!
_T. Mayleen :)
The electric engineer pointed out that the electric heater was at risk of fire.
>>> The electrical engineer pointed out that the electric heater was at risk of fire.
so, Ceiling type elec. unit heater should be deleted at hallway at 8sets.
>>> That is why ceiling type electric heater units should be removed from hallways at 8 sets.
I need de-modification.
>>> I need to do de-modification.
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