Mom's birthday!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is my mom's birthday!
I give money, icecream cake to her.
My brother gives money to her,too.
And my father cook sea mustard soup for the first time.
Mom~ Happy birthday!^^
강사 첨삭
You guys are so sweet. It makes me smile to hear the special things you did for your mom on her special day. I\'m sure you enjoyed celebrating her birthday a lot. I\'ll talk to you soon then.
T. Meg
Today is my mom\'s birthday!
>>Correct!I give money, icecream cake to her.>>I gave her money and ice cream cake.
My brother gives money to her,too.>>My brother gave her money too.
And my father cook sea mustard soup for the first time.
>>And my father cooked sea mustard soup for the first time.Mom~ Happy birthday!^^
>>Mom, happy birthday! ^^
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