Momo land
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Yes, enjoy the time with the students and with Momo Land.
You can search about the band if you have time.
Or maybe you can listen to their songs. ^^
Anyway, I hope you\'ll have a good time tomorrow!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Tommorrow Momo land(singing band)will go to my school.
>> The singing band Momo Land will go to our school tomorrow.
They will play with students for 25minutes.
>> They will play with the students for 25 minutes.
We can take a photo with Momo land.
>> correct (Capitalize the letter L, \"Land\")
>> We can take a photo with Momo Land.
But our homeroom teacher have to give a phone to students.
>> But the students have to give their phones to the homeroom teacher.
There will be a event.
>> There will be an event.
We can play with Momo land at lunch time.
>> correct (Capitalize the letter L, \"Land\")
I don\'t know Momo land but I will enjoy the time.
>> correct (Capitalize the letter L, \"Land\")
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