Momo land's performance and library event
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Hi, [이름]!
Wow! This is good news.
I think this experience is exciting.
I hope that you enjoyed Momo Land\'s show in your school.
Have a great day ahead and an exciting weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Yesterday,Momo Land come to my school to show off their talent and advertise games.
>> Yesterday, Momo Land came to our school to show off their talent and advertise games.
I saw Momo Land at the second line.
>> correct
They are really cute, but not very pretty.
>> correct
They played for 25 minutes.
>> correct
Today was library festival day.
>> Today was the Library Festival Day.
I participated the event and I got a candy and chocolate bar.
>> I participated in the event and I got a candy and a chocolate bar.
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