moms
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Some mom-cafes foster public opinion and influence policies at the time of the election specially.
They seem create cartels on the wrong side and monopolize on enterranc information.
Thet grow selfish and collective power more and more.
Such as silmilar groups shape a negative impact on Korea education.
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Hello there, Ms. [이름]!
This influence happens to many side of the world, where the powerful people easily manipulate or control a certain group of people. There will be no change in our society if this kind of system is tolerated, however, we don\'t have any options but to follow.
Have a great day!
Aki~
Some mom-cafes foster public opinion and influence policies at the time of the election specially.
>>> Some mom cafes foster public opinion and influence policies, especially at the time of the election.
They seem create cartels on the wrong side and monopolize on enterranc information.
>>> They seem to create cartels on the wrong side and monopolize interactive information.
Thet grow selfish and collective power more and more.
>>> They grow selfish and collect power more and more.
Such as silmilar groups shape a negative impact on Korea education.
>>> Such similar groups shape a negative impact on Korean education.
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