Mon. 02 Apr 2018 / letter of self-introduction for Opic

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good afternoon! ^^

Thank you for sending this composition. :)

You can go over the corrections and suggestions I gave for your sentences.

See you! ^^

Teacher Glenda

Thank you for the good teaching.
It is my letter of self-introduction for Opic.
How is it? Let me know if it has mistakes.

Let me introduce myself
My name is [Name][이름] Lee.

>> Correct
 I am 26 and from Seoul.

>> I am 26 years old and I\'m from Seoul, South Korea.

I am currently a university student. I am a senior and my major is Landscape.

>> Correct

or

>>> I am a senior university student majoring in Landscape architecture.

I hope to work for landscaping company after I graduate.

>>  I hope to work for a landscaping company after I graduate.

or

>>> My goal is to work for a landscaping company after I graduate.

I really enjoy my school. I try to get excellent grades in all of my classes.

>> Correct

or

>>> I really enjoy going to school. I always try to get excellent grades in all of my subjects.

My professors are quite good and I like most of my classmates.

>> Correct
 I am extrovert. I am good with people and enjoy meeting new people.

>>  I am an extrovert/ I am an extrovert person.
 I really want to get a good Opic score cause I worked very hard on the test and moreover This test is very important for me cause it is getting harder and harder to get a job in Korea.

>> I really want to get a good OPIc score because I am working very hard for the test. Moreover, this test is very important for me because it is getting harder and harder to get a job in Korea.
 Having a IH or AL score from this test is essential in my field. I will do my best for the test. so wish me luck.

>>  Having an IH or AL score from this test is essential in my field. I will do my best for the test, so wish me luck.