Monarchies
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Theme: [ESSAY] Are monarchies good or bad for a country?
First, monarch country have king or queen.
So some people can have on eye on the throne.
But, There can be two king so It can be good too.
I think monarch is not so good but not so bad.
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Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Are monarchies good or bad for a country?
First, monarch country have king or queen.
>> First, a monarchy country has a king or queen.
So some people can have on eye on the throne.
>> So some people have an eye on the throne or scheme to seize the throne.
But, There can be two king so It can be good too.
>> But if there were two kings, it would be beneficial to the country, too.
I think monarch is not so good but not so bad.
>> I think having a monarch is not so good but not so bad as well.
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