Monday blues
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~
Most people do have Monday blues but I have all week.
But I have to work for my future.
I think unprepared old age is not happiness but disaster.
So I\'m very afraid of my future because my parent was very poor so they were very tried in their life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for your time spent in writing this composition. see you in class later.
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
But I have to work for my future.
But I have to work for my future.
>>CORRECT!
I think unprepared old age is not happiness but disaster.
I think unprepared old age is not happiness but disaster.
>>I think getting old unprepared will be a disaster.
So I\'m very afraid of my future because my parent was very poor so they were very tried in their life.
So I\'m very afraid of my future because my parent was very poor so they were very tried in their life.
>>So I\'m very afraid for my future because my parents were very poor so they had a tiring life.
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