monday homework - 3

2012-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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The mathmatician Euclid's 'the principle of geomatry' hasn't been translated yet. Japan did it in 20th century. It is a shame. It is a basis of the math. Does Korea not care about students who major natural sciences? Liberal arts' field is either. Platon's philosophy books hasn't been translated all yet... The country's power comes from reading classic books. In these reason I would give my money to classic publisher. I wrote three parts which I want to give my money if I have one million dollars. It was a meaningful time which I could think about my values on what. I knew what I cherish from my homework. Thanks a lot~~~

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[이름], Wonderful job!I am happy to know that you cherished your homework. I really hope that this questions had help you a lot, specially in expressing your thought and explaining your reasons. I just observed some wrong spelled words so please be careful. I will be expecting more homeworks from you. T.Sheela The mathmatician Euclid\'s \'the principle of geomatry\' hasn\'t been translated yet. >> The book ,\"The principle of geometry\" of the mathematician Euclid\'s hasn\'t been translated yet. Japan did it in 20th century. >> Correct! It is a shame. >>Correct! It is a basis of the math. >>Correct! Does Korea not care about students who major natural sciences? Liberal arts\' field is either. >> Does not Korea care about those students who majored in natural sciences? Liberal arts? or other field related to it. Platon\'s philosophy books hasn\'t been translated all yet... >> Plato\'s philosophy books hasn\'t been translated all yet... The country\'s power comes from reading classic books. >> Correct! >>The country\'s power comes from reading classical books. In these reason I would give my money to classic publisher. >> In these reason I would give my money to classical books publishers. I wrote three parts which I want to give my money if I have one million dollars. >> Correct! >>I wrote three ways on how I want to give my money if I have one million dollars. It was a meaningful time which I could think about my values on what. >> It was a meaningful time where I could think about my values on this. I knew what I cherish from my homework. Thanks a lot~~~ \\ >> I already knew,what I cherished from my homework. Thanks a lot~ >> I already knew,what to cherished from my homework. Thanks a lot~

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