Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
1.We-We will play board game soon.>>CORRECTOR>>We will play board game in just a moment.
2.They-They love to raise plant and flowers.>>They love to raise plants and flowers.
3.I-I like to take a picture with beautiful flower.>>I like to take a picture with beautiful flowers.
4.He-He like to make neaklace using flowers and grasses.>>He likes to make a necklace using flowers and grasses.
5.She-She love to play with cute kitty and some other animals.>>She loves to play with a cute kitty and some other animals.
6.Mr.Brown-Mr.Brown usually bake some cakes for snacks.>>Mr.Brown usually bakes some cakes for snacks.
7.Mrs.Brown-Mrs.Brown is busy all day because she is take care of her children.>>Mrs.Brown is busy all day because she is taking care of her children.
8.My friends-Meet my friends.>>CORRECTOR>>You can meet my friends.
9.My teacher-My teacher like to take a picture of me and my fiends.>>My teacher likes to take a picture of me and my fiends.
10.My mother-My mother usually drink some coffe at morning.>>My mother usually drinks some coffee in the morning.
Very good, Claire!
- T. Melody ^^
2.They-They love to raise plant and flowers.>>They love to raise plants and flowers.
3.I-I like to take a picture with beautiful flower.>>I like to take a picture with beautiful flowers.
4.He-He like to make neaklace using flowers and grasses.>>He likes to make a necklace using flowers and grasses.
5.She-She love to play with cute kitty and some other animals.>>She loves to play with a cute kitty and some other animals.
6.Mr.Brown-Mr.Brown usually bake some cakes for snacks.>>Mr.Brown usually bakes some cakes for snacks.
7.Mrs.Brown-Mrs.Brown is busy all day because she is take care of her children.>>Mrs.Brown is busy all day because she is taking care of her children.
8.My friends-Meet my friends.>>CORRECTOR>>You can meet my friends.
9.My teacher-My teacher like to take a picture of me and my fiends.>>My teacher likes to take a picture of me and my fiends.
10.My mother-My mother usually drink some coffe at morning.>>My mother usually drinks some coffee in the morning.
Very good, Claire!
- T. Melody ^^
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